Pre-K
It was fall
in Brooklyn,
when the beautiful
weather of September
and I were strolling
beneath low-hanging trees,
walking hand-in-hand,
with the Autumn breeze.
I closed my eyes
to breathe,
slowly inhaling
the intoxicating
laughter
of little children,
joyfully skipping
as they happily
headed off to
their first day
of Pre-K,
Taking baby steps
towards their futures
like little birdies,
so eager to fly away
with their precious
little dreams.
Watching them leave
their mother's nest
for the very first time,
I couldn't help
but smile inside
as their precious
little wings
fluttered nervously
beneath
their clothing.
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Congratulations, quite poignant
ReplyDeleteVal,thank you so much!💜
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ReplyDeleteThank you, my dear, sweet, Pamella ❤💜
DeleteCongratulations so proud of you.
ReplyDeleteThank you! Mystery person,who ever you are! 😉
DeletePrince, I loved this! You captured the anticipation of those eager little faces and reminded me of my own experience of my daughters leaving. Beautiful images and word play in this piece! Congratulations and so happy people can read this!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much,Barbara. This is a poem I've always treasured, and I've always been so very proud of,because it allowed me to explore the broader depths of my pen. I can't tell you how thrilled I am, that it finally has a home.❤
ReplyDeleteLove this!!! So happy to have come across you!! You work is outstanding!!
ReplyDeleteJanie, thank you so much for taking the time to not only read my little poem, but for the wonderful feedback as well. I am truly humbled.
ReplyDeleteI journeyed through the scene. Nice piece.
ReplyDeleteThese lines sum up Pre-K:
"as their precious
little wings
fluttered nervously
beneath
their clothing" --so cute.
Thank you for this.
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DeleteThank you so much, Liza for reading as well as your comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.The last line truly resonated with me as well 😊
DeleteSo picturesque!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your lovely comments,Johana! I'm so thrilled you enjoyed it 😊
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ReplyDeleteLovely write and it makes me feel like I'm back in Brooklyn strolling the Promenade.
ReplyDeleteThank you! That really means a lot to me.
DeleteThank you! That really means a lot to me.
DeletePrince, my friend, you have captured the feeling of autumn in NY perfectly and you have also given us the feelings of joy and excitement as these little ones go into the world for the first time. I love so much about this and it should be honored! Congratulations! Or Mazel Tov!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Babs, I am truly humbled by your joy and praise for this poem; it holds a very special place in my heart as well. :)
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